The promotional script you got from Meowy is bad, like really bad.
Someone helps you every day with your written stuff.
Show the promotional material to Tabby. She will improve the script.
You have to have a reason to improve the script, first.
Show the material to Tybalt Magtheridon, an actor at Le Boule de Poils. ? After that Tabby will improve the script.
To get there, show the seeds to Cosmo and enter the theater.